final script

 Atalaya and Alena Mafia

Sofia has been bullied into going to the club with her university friends she's very shy and loves focusing on her studies however Maria is very seductive and loves to party and Jessy is her best friend. Sofia gets approached by a man that wants to buy them drinks Maria instantly starts flirting with him and goes to his car. When Jessy comes out the bathroom she asks where Maria is and both of them go to the carpark and approach his car.

   setting: in a club loud music playing

(Sofia gets approached by a handsome man while she's dancing with her friends Maria and Jessy)

Mafia: "Can I get you and your friends a drink"

Sofia: "I don't drink and were not interested"

(Maria steps in and starts flirting with the Mafia while Sofia looks uncomfortable and moves away from him)

Maria: "I'd like a drink" seductive tone.

Sofia:(whispers in Maria ear)"I have a weird feeling about him" as she stares into his eyes while he smirks at her

Mafia: "I'm gonna to head to my car real quick I'll be back"

Maria: "I can come with you"

(Maria and Mafia exists towards car park

15 minutes later...

(Jessy exits the bathroom looking like a drunk mess)

Jessy:" where Marua"(too drunk to barely walk or talk)

Sofia: "Maria decided to go to some car park with this dodgy guy" rolls her eyes

(Jessy leaning onto Sofia heads towards the car park)

Car parks pitch Jessy still leaning onto Sofia while Sofia frantically tries looking and shouting Maria name and looking through the windows of the cars, she sees Maria necklace and her face turns pale.

Sofia: "Jessy shh we need to leave and call the cops"

Jessy: (loud and drunk)"what are you on about? she's probably fucking him you are being dramatic!"

 ( both of them see his car and her body being dragged)

Jessy:(dramatically crying) what if she's dead?

Sofia: "shut the fuck up and stop crying he's gonna see us, we'll call the cops I promise you she's not dead"

( as Sofia and Jessy are running the Mafia sneaks from behind and hits them with a bat he drags their bodies to his car)

Jessy(in the boot of his car) screaming "LET US OUT OF HERE!", "THE COPS ARE COMING DICKHEAD"

(soon after Jessy passes out and Sofia is just laying on Maria body)

The Mafia had been driving in his car for about half an hour he was playing sinister music to block out the noise, 10 minutes near the house Sofia wakes up and is trying to look at signs and posters for escape the Mafia from his mirror sees that and stops the car.

(Mafia getting out his car and opening the boot Sofia tries to fake sleep)

Mafia: "I saw that you know"

(pulls out a pocket knife and grabs Sofia hair, she opens her eyes)

Mafia: "If you try anything again I'm going to slit your throat, do you understand?"

Sophia: "what kind of sick bastard kidnaps girls?"

Mafia: (starts laughing) what kind of bitch goes to a stranger car?next time make sure your friend doesn't do that again... if you get the chance

(pulls tape from behind her, lets go of her hair and tapes her mouth Sofia tries to resist though)

Mafia: "I know your smart enough not to get yourself killed"

(Sofia leans her head back while starring at the Mafia as he closes the boot and gets back into his car to play his sinister music again)

written synopsis

Section One: Content

In my story Mafia, a Mafia leader with mental health issues loves to kidnap females and force them to determine whether they live or die. They are stuck in his mansion trying to figure out which of the women is the mafia with the mafia leader himself and face obstacles of being killed or backstabbed. Only one survivor lasts in my thriller, and she figures out who the imposter is out of the females. Sofia is 19-year-old yoga instructor and she got kidnapped when she was walking home, she's the first victim her throat gets cut when she enters a room thinking she was safe. Maria 19-year-old is a university student that got seduced by him when she was at a club, he took her to his car and kidnapped her, she disappears mysteriously. Jessy was Maria's best friend, and she went looking after and gets shot in the process (Maria doesn't know this). Linda is a 22-year-old kindergarten teacher that thought she was going on a blind date however she gets kidnapped stabbed by the Mafia man himself.  Mabel 23-year-old had been his girlfriend for 6 months, and he supposedly switched on her and made her play his game.

Section Two: Narrative

individual SWOT analysis grid

 

individual mindmap

 

Response to the client brief

 explanation of demographics 

The information that I have about my audience is that this thriller film is aimed towards 16–24-year-olds. I might include in my thriller film a psychopath. This will appeal to the audience as it's something that many people in this age range find interesting and are drawn to. The advantages there are to making my thriller for this audience is that I know that people of this age range will want to watch this film and be interested in it also. The challenges that I foresee making my thriller for this audiences are not to make it like every other film as there's many thrillers which includes a psychopath and have the same or if not similar storyline. This will be a challenge as I need to make my film standout/be unique than all the other thriller films that include a psychopath.

conventions

The thriller conventions that will have to include in my work is murders/deaths as well as violence. I might include each convention by for murders is having a psychopath on the loose going around and murdering people. I will include violence by the victims try to get away from the psychopath or the psychopath trying to catch and run after his victims which may possibly lead to them getting injured. Another convention that will include is crime, this is because in the film that I'm creating is a crime thriller which is a major part of the film.

Industry requirements

The media organisation I've chosen to produce my thriller film would be Netflix as they are the second largest entertainment company it has published millions of their own and other organisation such as Disney. It started in 1997 by Reed Hastings and Marc Randolph in California, it's a worldwide media company everyone from around the world can go on it. One advantage of working with this company is they have made many famous actors and movies go famous they are a well-known media for getting people to watch I believe I can use this to my advantage and publish my film, a disadvantage would be that my film won't be able to get published in certain countries also the age range will change for them. BBFC would put my target audience as 15-24 because in the UK there is no 16.

medium 

My medium will have Netflix text as they are the ones, I've chosen to produce my thriller film.

opening scene conventions

Analysis	Reservoir Dogs	Seven
How does it introduce the characters & setting?	How does it engage the audience? (enigmas, clues, techniques)	How does it engage the audience? (enigmas, clues, techniques
How does it introduce the themes & narrative?	in the beginning we hear shouting "put the gun down"then were introduced to the characters.You can already tell its comedy thriller as theres a lot of jokes and humorous language and there this upbeat song in the background.	in the beginning there is audio dialogue in the background we see Brad Pitt and Samuel Jackson and then the use of the flashlight is used to transition into the next slide.
What technical language does it use and to what effect?   •Mise-en-scene •Camera language •Editing •Sound	mise-en-scene =guns, suits, and ties and weapons                                                         camera language=back view, side angle, close ups                                                         editing=                                                           sound=the man in charge making orders and calling them out by their names	mise-en-scene=flashlights, police badges, guns or any weapon camera language=close ups, zooms in, rear view editing= a lot of flashy or fast scenes use of certain objects like flashlight or clock further creates mores suspense sound=dialogue, screaming, the protagonist and antagonist voices, different things like a clock that you can hear.
What information about its production companies does it give?	it says the name of the production company at the beginning after "every dog" has its day"	it tells us who the main characters are a little bit about what the film is about

conventions of thriller

Film Title	What is theEnigma?	Who is the Protagonist?	Who is the Antagonist?	How is suspensebuilt?	Any other signs ofa thriller?
Se7en (1995)	Who is behind the killings	Detective williamsummerset  Detective davidmills	Mystery that’s why its an enigma	The music  And the bodies being discovered  Game hints	Suspense  Murder Dark weather(rainingetc)
The Usual Suspects (1995)	Who isKysasose? Who will live? Is Kysasose real?	Keten Verbal kint	Fencter Mc menace Hawkny	Suspense is built when the whole mystery on who and if Kysasoseis real	Murder(27) Dark scenery  Sound effects Mystery
The Silenceof The Lambs (1990)	Killer on the loose	Clarisse-fbi agent	Bill skins	The kettle  The repeat of the name Clarisse  And the gunshot	Creepy music  Murder Screaming Guns(weapons) Whispering
Rear Window (1954)	Who killed them? What happened?	James stewart	Its an enigma	When jameslove interest pulls the curtains and a body has just been dropped.	Damsel in distress(lady involved